All Comments on 'Going With The Flow'

You ought to have tagged for switching so those looking for that can find this story. Not enough switch stories around here. Good job.

Agree with JF, there are very few switching stories in the BDSM area

Another great story from you. Love it tremendously

your either up the river or down the creek, TK U MLJ LV NV

In some ways, the story was too "soft" It certainly wasn't overly erotic. However, the characters and their actions were not believable

nice story. would like you to continue the story. like the consentual aspect ot it.

I have a few minir quibbles, but very few:

under water (underwater)

step father (stepfather)

side-stroked ( sidestroked)

up tight (uptight)

waist band (waistband) (2)

Dads (dads)

take charge (take-charge)

I (-took) dropped Carol

over-heated ( overheated)

she (-literally) fucked my brains out (THIS STORY SHOULD BE ENDED AS SHE KILLED HIM BY REMOVING HIS BRAIN!!!!)

Carol (and) me

are on (have a)

Go with (the) flow