by Chris7sw
Very nice chapter! You should have made the boys play with each other too to round it all up.
from an aussie bloke who really loved this story and will have to read it again soon. thanks mate top job.
Such a hot story, need to re read, would love this to be made into a movie, how hot would it be
5 stars. great read. well written, and a sexy fun story. thanks!!
Well done it had me enthralled and very hard from start to finish, very graphic and well written. MORE PLEASE
I did wonder if you had thought of including some action between Chad and Steve. Their stiff cocks sliding into each other would have been good to see
This was such a descriptive and erotic piece of work that I could not resist wanking while reading it. I do agree with a couple of earlier commments that it would have been hot to have had the two guys have some male/male action, possibly mutual masturbation or oral. However, they are your characters so you can take them where you want.