All Comments on 'Gold Coast Pleasures Ch. 07'

by Chris7sw

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KingJay14KingJay14over 7 years ago
Great!

Very nice chapter! You should have made the boys play with each other too to round it all up.

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 7 years ago
bloody lovely

from an aussie bloke who really loved this story and will have to read it again soon. thanks mate top job.

myjomatemyjomateabout 7 years ago
Mate

Such a hot story, need to re read, would love this to be made into a movie, how hot would it be

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
brilliant!!

5 stars. great read. well written, and a sexy fun story. thanks!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fantastic Story

Well done it had me enthralled and very hard from start to finish, very graphic and well written. MORE PLEASE

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I did wonder if you had thought of including some action between Chad and Steve. Their stiff cocks sliding into each other would have been good to see

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This was such a descriptive and erotic piece of work that I could not resist wanking while reading it. I do agree with a couple of earlier commments that it would have been hot to have had the two guys have some male/male action, possibly mutual masturbation or oral. However, they are your characters so you can take them where you want.

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As I pass the youthful (cough, cough!) age of 75 most of my life is now memories and it's delightful to sit at the keyboard and create stories. Stories of my past experiences as well as stories of fun, frantic frolics and of wishful thinking too! Not long ago I went through ...

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