All Comments on 'Golden Keeper Ch. 02'

I am really enjoying your well written story, and you certainly have caught my imagination with your main character!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Kind regards

keep going with this story. It's intriguing me and I can't wait to see where it's going to go.

It's a great story please keep writing. After all it's rude to leave your readers hanging.

Off to read the next chapter. PJ xx

Is english your 2nd language???It is some what confusing with the words your using..maybe an editor if you ever write another one.....but doubtful,,since its been a few years since this was posted,,,,or if you even get this feed back,,,,a strange story,although different,which is a good thing,,,