All Comments on 'Golfing with Jessica Alba'

You are a Genious Kash!

Keep it up!!

Kash, you are a champion!!! All of your stories are fucking hot!! Whens the next sex for drugs coming anyway?

Awesome story! Kicking her ass in golf and then fucking it. Just genius! Keep up the excellent stories

Hi Kash!

Good story but I miss foot-action. Jessica is also one of my favourites.

Very, very good story. You are an absolute genious. I need more Jessica Alba.

"birdy" is spelt birdie,lol

anyway, great story

Wow man killer story gotta luv the alba top marks. Great success!

What a great story, smacking your balls around with Jessica. She's always been in my Fave Five, along with Jennifer Aniston, Julia Roberts, Halle Berry, and Blake Lively. Hopefully on Day Two, you managed to do a little titfucking as well scoring another hole in One, Two & Three.

Uninteresting story, poorly written with way too many paragraphs of trite dialogue. Not worth looking to see if writer has done any other stories here.

Excellent story, Very nicely done, good use of one of her hobbies.

To the comment before about the dialogue and paragraphs? That's called a plot! And to think that comment nearly made me not read this story

That was freaking awesome *_*

The Story is poorly written and lives off starring j alba, but there is more to a good story than just its famous characters, the storyline is non existant you go too far suggesting that they have chemistry after those few lame dialogues also check your spelling it is unnecessarily directing attention away from a basically good idea.

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Great work, keep it up. You know how to handle celebrities!

Completly loved it, very hot

Very good, write more.

An epilogue of him making her his woman or something.

What made this so awesome was those two words constantly used, so sexy

amazing story

Not bad, nice to read a story where it makes you feel like you are watching it not just reading only sex.

I've noticed some storylines are starting to go straight into the sex, but nothing done about the build up to it.

Please continue to write more to this storyline, maybe 4 or 5 chapters, make it an adventure / secret affair instead of a 1 off experience.

I love dirty talk in stories and if Jessica Alba was calling me a mother fucker, I'd ask her how bad she wants to get spanked