All Comments on 'Goli'

This is very male bike riders dream. Now where did I leave that tire pump? Thanks for a fun and sexy read. Hope you have more to come!

Great story...very well written and imaginative. Funny that it would come from an author with the name of "Boogerdude"...lol. Whatever you call yourself, keep up the excellent writing.

Very well written, just descriptive enough to offer the reader a pleasant rise.

The only problem: No way in real life they would let Goli rise on her own after taking that kinda spill. Plus, your character, Dan, shouldn't have moved her head at all in case of spinal injury.

Just a little medical FYI if ever you find yourself in a situation where a beautiful Israeli takes a bad tumble off her bike in the future....

Well done. Feeds to that yen in us who fancy younger lasses. Made me want to be there.

Thanks

Dear Author, Nice job of taking a lowly bike ride to new heights with this well crafted story of possible new love. Thank you for the trip which I truly enjoyed:) jntiques