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Click here"Mine too!" Sarah laughed, unable to keep the hostility up, this was her sister and... She looked so happy! And well she'd had the best orgasms of her life and was not in a relationship with SHAWN MALONE AND COLBIE MCGEE!
"We gotta go bro, kiss your new girl goodbye, get your clothes on, and let's roll." Shawn said, giving Meredith an apologetic look, double thumbs up to Marco as if none of them could see his approval.
"You gotta cuddle and cruise?" Sarah asked, turning her back with Colbie and Shawn while Marco and Meredith dressed, Shawn tossing his friend his recovered clothes.
"No!" Colbie stopped as soon as Shawn smiled and opened his mouth. "You know Marco can't do two things at once, I gotta go, I'm late. No bits!"
"I did two things at once earlier, no complaints about that." Shawn Oohed was about to turn back to his friend but Colbie tugged him.
"Nope! I hate being the responsible one, I am gonna be late. No bits!"
"Such a ball buster." Shawn was playful about it though.
"I thought I was the ball buster today." Sarah couldn't help herself.
"Stop it! Please!" Colbie giving Sarah a little shove before grabbing her and pulling her into a kiss. "You're gonna get it this weekend."
"And send it to me!" Shawn added.
Sarah stood there smiling from ear to ear as the three rushed out, a little embarrassed by it until she looked over to see her sister was doing the same damn thing. Both Perkins sisters standing there like dorks, delighted in how the day had turned out.
- COMMENTS
Defluerover 3 years agoAuthorI really struggled with the ending on this one. Was worried that the anal would bring too many complaints, eventually I realized that that was the entire premise of the story, that she had to lose ALL her virginities, Gone In Sixty Minutes. Once I came to that decision I was able to finish. In the original "concept" of the idea I really didn't plan on the Thruple thing. I really thought Shawn was going to be a jerk, that Colbie and Sarah would offer the anal as a way to save Colbie and his relationship, but he wouldn't be a jerk. Every time I wrote him that way the story just stalled.
Questions to any future readers:
The way the friends pronounce "Sarah Perkins" is reference to something, is it too subtle? I thought it would be fun to have something in there for people to get (The people who watched the show at least, that it's a play off of not a direct sort of thing.) without it being written right out, but later reflection had me worried it would be too subtle, nobody would get it, and then it would be something that never pays off.
I tried to make Sarah as innocent and young as I remembered my friends being back then, she basically falls in love with Brick, then Marco, then Colbie, and Shawn too. Does that come across?
Was the "Sperm and squirm" "O-Face and about face" "Cum and run" section enjoyable or just a distraction?
Anonymousover 3 years agoReally love your story. The characters are so real and it's sweet.
BrokenUnicornover 3 years agoI gave the story 5 stars because I loved it, but be careful with your copy/replaces in the future. You have a number of times that "ass" and "yes" turned into "assy" and "yessy", which I assume was because of an overzealous replace job. Same thing happens with Sarah's name randomly becoming Sare several times.
I didn't want to downrate the story - because I really enjoyed it - but do watch for that in the future.
