All Comments on 'Good Girl'

sweet story

a maine reader

Wonderfully sleazy. Good job.

Your definitely kept my attention and hard the whole time. Starting off and continuing was great.

Easily got me wet, loved fingerfucking myself to this

I really like to hear about guys licking pussys it really turn me on

You once again, met the high mark on this story. Erotic, well done. Thanks.

Liked the style. Liked the writting. Keep it up.

Best story I've read on here, well done and thanks!

Really well-written and not filled with terrible grammar and spelling like a lot of stories on here are. Good work!

You do an excellent job telling a story and the sex is really good. This one was second to your story "Torrent' which is still my favorite. I'm working on reading all your stories.

I really did enjoy this story, and your clean writing only makes it that much hotter (faint/feint notwithstanding! lol). I sure do wish you would right a next chapter, one where maybe Laura DOES move in with her daddy and they continue to love each other without contraceptives, hint hint? haha Will read your other selections, now! :)

Wonderful story, well told and kind to both Dad and his Good Girl. Thank you!

Oh my god...its been so long since I read a good story! I loved every minute of it and cant wait to see if you have any more good stories hiding away!

Fucking awesome! Totally hot and delicious!!

My only complaint, which I had nearly forgotten by the time I reached the end of the story (lol) was when he first spanked her and he said he hit her as hard as he could. That immediately pissed me off, if he had actually done that he would have bruised the fuck out of her ass, bursting who knows how many capillaries

...anyway, that aside, the story rocked! .

Being a slave daughter in the bdsm world i think about my Daddy and i defiantly was able to feel the heartbreak of being naughty and the swoon of being called a good girl

. I really loved how you made it this storey so loving,sexy,arousing and so right. You are so talented, and I am so aroused. Great Stuff.

This is one of the best incest fantasy stories ive ever read. I was carried along in the mind of the father, imagining my discovery of a young daughter's body in just the way you described it. Your hesitations and increases in the speed of events / erotic discoveries were perfect. I came with them on the first orgasm. I continued to read to the end because the incestuous love story was tender and even funny when the daughter wants to be taken out and displays her actual maturity and power.

...for being an outstanding storyteller! This one was sexy on an epic level, just perfect. <3

I've fantasized many years now, wanting my dad to finally give in to my teasing him.i want him so bad i ache. Stealing him from bitch mum is my ultimate goal. I'm 26, Rick is 46. I'm stacy18 _bi at Hotmail if you want to hit me up

Part2!

Thank you for providing a great piece of writing that doesn’t include screaming and swearing in the intimate moments. Such a delightful change of pace!

Karen sounds like a bitch. Daughter could be a slut but father is definitely a loser for being so polite to bitch karen

Excellent piece of Aussie taboo writing. Look forward to perusing the rest of your work.

Mmmm such a good read! An Aussie writer I love! Thx for sharing such a caring loving hot erotic honey piece of writing haha x

Very well written. 5 stars.