All Comments on 'Good Jock, Bad Jock'

by kerrymcboyd

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Rwa4768Rwa4768over 6 years ago

I hope to see more of this story.

63lsmith63lsmithover 6 years ago
ON THE BAD SIDE OF FAIR

I will hold back on judgement, until I see were this goes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Interesting

I would like to see more of this story as it could vo either way.

jim13164jim13164over 6 years ago
Hot

Really good and hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Hot! I'm looking forward to seeing how this story develops, and learning gradually more about the characters -- in between some more hot scenes of course!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
THE COCK

Describe the guys cock ad how each part felt and how you worked it. How long was his cock, most guys can handle 6 or 7 inches, bigger than that takes talent. How fat 5 or 6 inches and then there is the cock head. Was it rounded like a plumb, these are delicious to suck on or was it Mushroom shaped with a good 1/4 inch larger then the width of the cock a bit more work but still great but it takes practice to take it all the way back when face fucked (It is also a great ass stretcher). Was it cut or uncut?? Uncut cocks need a bit extra effort like pulling the foreskin back, putting your tip of you tongue against that bit of flesh at the front base of the cock head. Pull the foreskin up over you tongue ad lick round and round that super sensitive part of his cock, make him start cumming that way then suck lick crazy-------tsgtdick

HairyJacquesHairyJacquesover 6 years ago
Great, quick story!

I stumbled across "Speech and Debate" and got hooked. I don't want it to end, so I took a break to read "Good Jock, Bad Jock." I'm not disappointed. Sometimes I like a good, quick story. I stroked myself throughout and got nicely aroused thanks to you. I really like your seamless flashbacks to the quad, where the protagonist ogled the "bad jock." I enjoyed the dominance of the bad jock. He didn't exactly mouth rape the protagonist, who on the quad indicated interest and outside the showers gave tacit consent. (I guess I have a thing for Alpha Males.) All that said, I agree with the earlier commenter who expressed a desire for more description of the guys' physical attributes. This is always a Catch 22 since you might turn off readers who don't like the physical attributes you assign, but for others these details are the difference between mere arousal and orgasm.

OralSubSeniorOralSubSeniorabout 5 years ago
Good boy

He knew what you "wanted" and "needed". Life is short, enjoy it. When I was young I didn't think people could tell I wanted to suck cock. In my mid-thirties I had been drinking in a bar, I was horny. Out of the blue, a guy said to me, "I bet you'd like to suck my cock." Guess I had been obviously staring at his crotch. We went to the restroom and within a minute I was on my knees and he was saying, "I knew you'd be a good cocksucker". I've been sucking and enjoying cock ever since.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
like your story

I really like your story. I have began a series myself, different but somewhat alike. I have always be an atheletic guy very manly looking and acting. I have a thing for married and unmarried guys, i will give great satisfaction but also demand it as well. i hope that you will catch it when it comes out, haven't got a title yet. but if you want to get on a wish list when i do publish it. send me an email @ randyah@sbcglobal.net

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Loved it, man. Wish that it would happen to me. For sure makes me want to continue to check out all the male crotches I can ogle. Maybe stare a little longer so they might notice and maybe decide to give me what I need.

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