All Comments on 'Good Puppy'

Had to read this twice as I couldn't decide if I liked it or not first read.

Fetish is of course a matter of taste, and animal role play is not mine.

However I did like this.

His text reply: 'good slut' was incongruous with the puppy/dog role play - should have been : good girl / bitch / dog.

Not sure about having her bark (maybe the taste thing) I found that funny rather than arousing - but maybe this is all part of animal role play.

A few missed opportunities for similes / metaphors here eg- 'cock' could have replaced by 'bone'

For such a short story, the set up and scene worked well.

It had me wagging my tail . . .

I liked the text of the story and the plot, but the subs name as 'Puppy' was a little odd. But what ever rocks your boat, keep up the good work.