All Comments on 'Good Things Come'

I've been on this site for many, many years now. This is hands down one of the hottest stories I've read. Your writing is clear, evocative and well-paced. The characters are fleshed out enough that I have a strong mental image of who they are without being tedious. The emphasis on love (without going into that over-the-top obsession realm that is an instant turn off) is gratifying; the lust is potent without being dramatic.

Looking forward to reading further submissions by you!

I'm pretty sure this is one of, of not the best-written submission I've ever read on this site, and I'm not a person given to overstatement. A thousand small, unusually well-done things (syntax, grammar, character development, etc.) together make it stand heads above the usual online stuff and make you come across as less of just another person with a keyboard and a modicum of imagination and more of a (brilliant) conventional author who just happens to be able to write amazing erotica. You're the Anais Nin of the Internet, and I'll be rechecking your submissions page every chance I get. Keep writing ^_^

It was a wonderful read. I agree with the other comment, the love is so apparent and for those that say they can never find love in these stories hasn't been reading the right ones. Definite add to my favorites.

A delightfully erotic story with a great sense of timing and detail. Whether you continue this story or offer different ones, have the confidence to know others love your style in telling these stories. Good fortune!

love it and the dynamic between nick and violet! i would want to see more of them soon!

Love the characters, their interacting and complete understanding. First time on this site what a pleasure. Thanks for sharing :)