by PetProject
You gave us enough of the characters that we invested and liked them, and then you made 'em have hot sex! It was perfect!
I find no fault with story. Awesome job of telling a story about two friends that finally decided to take their relationship to the next level. Who knows, he might have knocked her up and they might become a family. Good job.
I absolutely loved this piece. Very sexy and very well written. Two enthusiastic thumbs up!