All Comments on 'Goodbye Mellisa'

How out of character for you. Must be a repost of a very early story. But any how, i really liked it. Gave it a 4.

but not from me.

It is terrible, but I agree to show to the readers sometimes not creampieating, cuck life, divorce or successful reconciliation are the possibilities but sad violance or murder. The murder is not BTB, because the wife does not "enjoy" the ex husband's success from the coffin.

Good read Bob.Thanks for sharing.

bullshit ending. 2 stars is the best I can do.

A little too cut and dried for my taste . As a pulp exercise straying spouse eradication. , this fine albeit not overladen with imaginative wrinkles. Proof of life from hall of author terminating straying spouse character . Not to worry Others will love it in place of myself. Call it a hunch.

He is a cold blooded highly skilled assassin.

He is well schooled in making a death look like an accident even though it isn't.

Why not kill her after finding out about the first time?

Make it look accidental.

Why not wait until she inherited?

Only nine more months and he would get millions.

An accident then would work too.

Done right and he would never even go down to the police station.

and act naturally is not and EZ thing to do. TK U MLJ LV NV

The mistake of the murder was he cut his cock. He should have killed him simple. The cut cock is a very good trace to him better than the Cessna for the Police.

clinical? passionless?

I too have trouble figuring out why he waited so long. Why only this one and none of the other men?

Reads well, has some originality. Four stars.

He decided it was time for her death, as soon as he found out who her lover was...That was the chance to kill her violently and let the police with reasonable doubt...He was lucky, because the lover being there turned it even more plausible...About her inheritance...Even if he divorced her, that was lost for him...It was one more alibi for him...For me the parts that weren't explained clearly were: How and when did he got the Cessna and the Honda stationed in the town where the conference took place? 3*

I am amazed so many people are missing out on the plan

1) By having MULTIPLE KNOWN lovers, he showed this was not a crime of passion and cast doubt on his guilt. Why now?

2) Why now was OBVIOUSLY so he had another good candidate for the crime: i.e. the Genovese family. None of her other lovers offered that kind of muddying of the waters.

3) by leaving her trust fund in the wind and knowing about it, he cast more doubt upon himself as the suspect, because what guy doesn't like money?

4) By leaving an IMperfect alibi, it seems like he is LESS credible as a murderer since a killer would have left a PERFECT alibi., or at least as good as possible.

5) same reason for not having a lawyer

But twocrows raises a valid point. People die EVERY DAY in their homes. People have bad car accidents. People slip and die in their tubs. Bad meat.

and another fatal flaw was this was an UGLY crime. Cutting of the cock? Sorry, that makes things look personal. She would have marks on her body. They would know something was fishy. And not to put too fine a point on it, but every airplane in the sky which takes off is tracked to a very good extent.

IF they think to look.

Still, a decent caper story. Great? No. That would involve caring about any of these people. I do not care about any of these people But the process was sort of fun and semi plausible.

At least in this story JPB didn't have the husband a wimp and keep the wife.

Great story, although I would have thought that given his history that he would have simply made sure her first lover met with an unfortunate accident and that any possible future lovers were herded off at the pass so to speak. Why? To avoid the possibility that she would pass a possibly fatal or debilitating sexual disease to him of course. Oh, by the way, if he really wanted revenge he could have waited for her money to hit and then arranged for her accident to happen when he had a solid alibi. As for the comment about aircraft, airliners are tracked, not small planes unless they are near an airport, just too damn many of them in the air and far too many overworked air controllers to be bothered tracking them otherwise. But that is my take on the story and it is still a great story anyway.

His wife would have been a beneficiary of the Trust BUT does not own the assets. He would not inherit the assets of the Trust nor would he share in their value in a divorce. He would have to also be a beneficiary. So, their assets would NOT have been approx equalled.

However, we don't let pedantic facts get in the way of a good story and I have always enjoyed JPB stories.

JPB can write ALL kinds of stories, for ALL kinds of readers.

Would you rather this story featured a creampie eating cuck? Guess what? Bob has a story or three like that somewhere on his page! So you would rather the unremorseful serial cheater gets murdered? Well HERE YA GO! This one is for you! Need a guy who won't take any shit off of his wife, but comes to his senses and takes her back, after she proves her innocence? Well. THAT is what JPB did yesterday! WAAC, RAAC, CUCK, NO-CUCK, BDSM, IR, Humor, Mature, Group Sex, and even Romance. Bob has ALWAYS proved that he could deliver in any genre. But more than that, he can and will further represent and deliver the goods WITHIN the various SUB- catergories as well!

Every story may not be for everybody, but there IS a story for everybody somewhere on that page, And the prolific beauty of it is that there is probably more than just one! If there is a reader out there looking for it, you better bet your bippy that Bob has wrote one for it!

Thanks so much for your ongoing contributions! What would this site be like without you? I am sure that Laurel knows the extreme debt she owes you........not to mention how many authors you have inspired and influenced. Afterall, time after time, you have shown the LW crowd, how it is done!

Keep 'em coming, Bob! It's been great having something new from you!

Bob I have an idea. Let's go back to the tavern next time and just tell jokes or get drunk and sing some songs. Man this was brutal.

Jedd Clampett

You big softie.

R u trying to grow a pair?too late.

people want to know why he waited. simple, he waited for the perfect time. he waited until he could get away with it. someone wants to know why his wife didnt have an accident after her first affair. as soon as the cops found her dead, even if it looked like an accident they would check into her life. they would find that she was having an affair which would instantly point to the husband. as soon as they found out about his hiring a PI they would know that he knew about her cheating. they can then build a case around that. people have been sent to prison on less. the only bad part is the airplane. after 9-11 it would be a little harder to slip that one by. still very good story, although he souldve let his wife talk a little after he killed her lover. i like the conversations after they get caught cheating. i keep wanting to see if one of them can come up with something original.

Are you trying to claw back the redneck vote?

I would like to think this story is an elaborate in joke demonstrating that to the BTB crowd no horror inflicted on an unfaithful wife is too extreme.

any woman that cheats on her marriage should expect damage, killing her just ends her lies, it isn't really punishment or BTB just an end to her lies. Of course in some societies you could bury her so just her head was above ground then have her relatives throw stones at her head until she was dead.

He's a fag and a real disgusting animal!

Are you talking about yourself? It would be a great help if somebody did that to you, one way to get rid of your stupid comments you make on every story.

me a bit toward the end of the first page. He was talking about the wife, the godfather's daughter, the trust fund, etc. and got the two women confused. I decided to plow ahead and hope the confusion didn't interfere with the rest of the story. It didn't.

I liked this very much, I guess that makes me a "REDNECK" according to some asswipe in this comment section ! I've been bitching about lack of good LW stories posted lately, but happily in the last few weeks we've had some good ones ! I'm very happy that the Godfather of LW , JPB is back and posting again ! I'm sure I've read just about all of his stories posted on literotica and on sol , and some I really didn't like the ending, but even those were entertaining reads, and most were just plain GOOD ! JPB please keep writing, your legions of fans have missed you !

I woke up. And there, sleeping next to me, was the whore. If only, I thought; remembering the dream I just had.

Dear Bob,

. With this you could create a whole new chapter or chapters with these characters. Hell, there could be several dream sequences with varying ways of dealing with the situation.. That's not to say I didn't enjoy this story, cause I did. But this may be a way of writing some hard-core BTB stories and more realistic type stories together.

Anyway, good stuff. This is why 007 isn't married.

Thanks,

D

No bs no excuses just a well planned exit strategy.

Carvohi still reading and commenting I see. Finish your own stories yet?

Two days, two JPB stories. Does it get any better?

BTB

According to him it was unnecessary ,never found out why she cheated. Just offed her and her present lover. If what he told the police was true why? And murder for a cheater is too much. You have to go to the Middle East to find that mentality. If that trust fund was coming for her , your story is so full of holes. And makes no sense.by the way Bob nice to see you writing again. U just made the burn the bitch crowd happy!

I love the story, but could have like it to b more chapter(s) detailing stuff.

I think the wive got it easy. But then again he have to plan an exit strategy for himself with no witness.

I hate women that cheat on their husband. Here in our country if a woman cheat she will get toss out with almost nothing. The US law gives too much power to women...should have been once she cheat she forfeited her 50% right when divorce. Why their marriage law rewarding the immoral, n outright destroying family values. She should b punished not reward her.

With his skills and training he didn't need to hire a PI.

With his way of looking at and dealing with her cheating having a PI (or anyone else) that knew that he knew about the cheating was a liability.

His training included infiltration and disguise.

Not saying that smart people don't do dumb things but when he looked at her and 'knew' she was cheating a man with his abilities could find out for himself without leaving a trail.

This was harsh BTB stuff. And I would have liked a little more about the wife, but this worked just fine. I do think he should have waited long enough to get the money from her trust. Why give up millions for a few months time and a better alibi?

Well played Bob.

It is not BTB, because the wife can not see the husband's future success. The wife's murder stories are sad Consequence stories only. The cock cutting from the lower is a very good evidence the husband would have hired a assassin............BTW The criminal news are full of spouse murders for jelousy or greeding.

Naturally there are a few exceptions when the wife murder was BTB, but in those stories the husband did not kill or did not organize the murder as BigK10 "The Fate of Her Lovers".

Duna

I hate cheaters. Especially worthless cheating cunts. Both the whore and her jerkoff lover got what they deserved. Extreme? Yes but after all, in fiction all is possible.

Five Stars

Nor a murdered wife, even for cheating. I want to see them burn, not die. Although Bob, very nicely done. You even gave me a few idea's for my latest novel that has more than one commonalities. ;)

Mellisa (title), Melisa (early in body of text), Melissa (most of the rest of text)!

Incommensurate punishment! Especially for Late(st) (pun!) Bull. The Bull made NO vows to Hubby.

Why not wait 9 months and divorce? @Lenard - Civil Courts in most (perhaps all) states do not just consider 'assets,' they also consider dependable future income, so the division of joint assets would have been significantly more equitable ... even if the trust did NOT provide a significant initial benefit.

Since Hubby could make Cold, Logical Long-Range plans, what was the value of wasting the time and energy to execute Sweetie (with a Bull-Burning Bonus)? No mention of Hubby having a Sweetie-in-waiting with whom to start a family (or even better sex?). On the other hand, Hubby lost all the great sex he requested, plus more that Sweetie initiated! And some great arm-candy.

If Hubby REALLY wanted to punish Sweetie with subtle and uncertain threat, why not arrange for Bull1 to earn a Darwin Award* by losing his nuts by accident ... making sure Sweetie heard about it in a round-about way. Then, a month or so later, Bull2 loses his entire package in a different type of accident ... with different grape-vine informants! Then wait 6-9 months for Bull3!

The story ends with "... act normal and wait and see." Wait and see WHAT? Hubby is SURE that he got away with multiple murder! If he's waiting to see if he got away with a crime which has NO statute of limitations, that ALONE is a compelling reason to NOT commit the crime! Looking over your shoulder for the rest of your life is a much longer self-punishment than that imposed on Sweetie and Bull!

* Darwin Award does NOT necessarily mean death ... just removal from gene pool!

"2) Why now was OBVIOUSLY so he had another good candidate for the crime: i.e. the Genovese family. None of her other lovers offered that kind of muddying of the waters."

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I thought that was where this was going, but the surprise that he was there implies this was not really a factor. Turner's death was just a coincidence. Yeah, if Turner was still alive there is a chance it could have come up during the investigation, but then, even with having to deal with his in-laws, he’d have to be interrogated, which would have created a chance of Frank’s story unraveling. Hell, especially considering his in-laws he may have an ever greater reason to cooperate just to save his ass from them.

It seems that he pick a bad wife and she picked the wrong husband given her inclinations.

Well written story with an extreme solution...but maybe not so extreme considering his back ground.

... I just wish I could've done the same thing

with my cheating ex and her last lover.

Alas, I never got retribution...

What an ass

There are a lot of sick fucks out there reading these stories! Killing people over infidelity? Revenge on some level, maybe. But this? In my life I've seen those cold eyes that this soulless character apparently has. I'll repeat, soulless . Expect more out of you JPB.

NOT waiting 9 months created 7 million reasonable doubts. JPB initially withholding the dickectomy was classic cop procedure. Wearing clear eyeglasses rather than dark wraparound fit-over sunglasses over regular sunglasses - to defeat facial recognition and human identification - was suboptimal trade craft though.

Another great JPB story. Thanks for writing.

I usually like JPB stories, but this one left me cold. No emotion, no humanity. Not pleasant to read.

His service to his country turned him into a psychotic mastermind serial killer? It isn't going to be the cops that you've conveniently written as stupid, itll be the mafia that owns the cops that get him when their paid lackies find out that he fingered them for a crime they didnt commit. Between the assho loo e protag and the over the top murders, not much to like here unless you're from Saudi Arabia

... As usual, this is another story well told by JPB in his style, short and to the point. I thank Bob for the story and the ending. You don't always get an ending with Bob.

Had I been the hero in the story I would waited the 9 months and taken half of her stuff. That was his reason for not divorcing her when he discovered the first bed buddy; he didn’t want to get beaten up by the courts. So he commits a capitol felony, loses his share of the inheritance and has cops in two cities sniffing around him.

Bob thank you for the story, Panther fan.

This is how a cheating wives story should end.

Sharia law dictates that one caught in adultery gets 100 lashes (man or woman), however the Taliban in Afghanistan frequently executed women caught in adultery, even though Alla forgives adultery (Qur'an (39:53) . Some of the readers seem to have strong Taliban leanings, (100 lashes be dammed... bring on the bullets).

Hater of the Taliban

Great story to teach a lesson to cheating wives. There is a big difference between a "Hot" wife and a "Cheating" wife. The first takes lovers with her husband´s approval and knowledge; the second is a dishonest sneak.

My wife has spread her legs for a lot of guys during our marriage. However, she has never cheated on me. Mellisa got what she deserved and justice was dished out by a cool, calm professional. This story was very, very well written and exciting.

Goodbye Mellisa!

A very nice BTB story.

Excellent ! Absolutely cold revenge, that's exactly what should happen to errant cocks. Better yet, wear a mask and make him survive without his cock.

Is this some kind of research project? Two stories in two days with very different male characters and outcomes. Guess which one is getting the higher vote! Just seems suspicious that you would submit such opposite stories.

Neither story is very good, but you gotta give credit where credit is due. Too bad you couldn't leave the now dickless asshole to live his life peeing into a plastic bag. You know, you could have cut off her clit instead of putting her out of her misery. I know, I know, can't leave any witnesses. Still, death is just too quick and painless for some transgressions.

I hope someday you will take on the real issue that you ignore or avoid in most of your stories: why did she cheat? No, not for cock, not for orgasms, and not for lust. Men cheat for sex. Women cheat for psychological and emotional reasons, and JPB does not like to explore or expound on those reasons. Too bad. Such great plots and characters, yet such empty endings.

I can see I MUST write the wife murder is not BTB in the 99.9% of the stories several times.

If the husband or the assassin of the husband kill the lover of the cheating wife when they plan a common life after the divorce it may be BTB to eliminate the future spouse of the soon to be cheater ex wife (if the police could not investigate or it was organized to accident), because the living ex wife should start alone instead of her second marriage.

The wife murder is not BTB but sad Consequence!

The media are full of spouse murders in all over the World and these are sad tragedy.

where the hell did you do your service? You seem to know very little about spec ops and the type of man they require. Your guy is straight out of Hollywood central casting which means pure BS.

I don't like people dying but for what they were doing to him it's worth it . A little far fetched but a good read

It really seems to have pissed off jpb's cream pie eating fan base. Fuck those nutless fruitcakes and their latent homosexual ways. Cheating cunts deserve to die. My qualm with this is Melissa was dead before he shot her. Why? Unless the bull was extremely under endowed, the act of forcing the disembodied cock into her throat with a ball gag chaser doesn't leave much breathing room. Mind you I'm no medical expert but I've heard of females dying from time to time after accidentally biting their lover's cock off, usually preceded by a moving vehicle abruptly stopping against a solid object. But hey, it was nice to read something that wasn't your run of the mill btb or jpb tale. I never bitch about far fetched plots cause it's nice to see a writer using imagination.

High and tight. Military style.

he is one of the most prolific authors on the whole net.He must be over 80 years-old now.Glad you are still writing!

she is done cheating with a dong in her mouth.

Excellent!!! Missed your writing.

I wonder if Porter will have an accident?

The fact is that JPB can not win from the comentators. Even I get irritated when he has

a husband sit in a closet watching through the key-hole. The funny thing is that when I was child it was considered quite normal for a husband to kill cheating wives and their lovers before committing suicide, but if they went to court they could plead temporary insanity. Nowadays the husband's guilt is treated differently, but if I does not kill things could get worse yet selling all he owns to divide things up with her. Personally I would have offered her the house in exchange for the business free and clear.

Real good BTB.

Not a very nice guy at all the protagonist.

who are you, and what did you do to that wimp JPB?

Well focused non wimp non consenting cuckold. Simplest of form and straight forward. Of course this could've been extended to a long long story with lots of tension and drama. It deserves a five stars because it has great characters who don't take crap.

just as it should be. Also great story writing author.

- Always prefer a Cheating Wife Story where the husband gets his revenge but in this one he's made a big mistake. When the bodies were discovered,finding the lovers sliced off cock in the cheating wife's throat makes it a VERY PERSONAL execution. Maybe the detectives will go for the MOB connection,but I think they'd look long and hard at the husband for quite awhile.

- (Too bad hubby didn't slice off Turner's balls and shove them down the cheating twats throat too! And while he was at it,chop off her clit and stick it in Turner's mouth. WTF,if it's gonna get gross and violent anyway,why not go for the whole ball of wax?!

re:

There seem to be a lot of Taliban readers here.

Sharia law dictates that one caught in adultery gets 100 lashes (man or woman),

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However; the 'Old Testament' says the punishment is stoning to death with stones.

And even the 'New Testament' says that to marry after divorce is adultery.

So the only way to marry another is to have the adulterous partner die.

I have to say, this is a very satisfying tale. In the long run who really cares about a cheating sluts excuses for cheating. Not really relevant, all that matters is that she did it and should be appropriately punished. How very sweet that the person she chooses to cheat with gets the same punishment.

To the point with the fool fucking her getting his clock cleaned too. He was only going to off her but dumb ass couldn't stay away from her cheating ass. He had nothing against the guys, she was the betrayer.

A feel good story ......just read the it! 🔪+🔫= 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Just what the Slut needed and deserved

All the morons commenting on how great it was to murder your wife cause she was fucking another also think if it were reversed she should forgive and forget. These assholes like the Muslim double standard where a woman is subservient to her husband a piece of property to use sand abuse as they se fit.

It's still Premeditated murder....

@Networkguru - and you make it sound like that's a bad thing? It's just a little more routine cleansing of the gene pool.

I guess the cheating wife and her lover didn't live happily ever after, huh?

Ha

LOL

So many holes the story is a sieve!

he should remember....But & What If, TK U MLJ LV NV

He's my hero! What a load of shit this fiasco of a story is! Are you sure he wasn't superman? Tough guy fag loves disco...that should have been the title. Gave it a generous 2.

The service has lilleraly 1000's of people like this. These silly comments are from people who've never had the pleasure of seeing their fellow man thru the sites of a weapon...Superman ? hardly just well trained G.I.'s doing their best.......

You are one dumb sonofabitch if you don't think there are men and women who our government has taught and trained to do all those things without leaving a clue as to who actually committed a crime or maybe stage the scene to look as if no crime has been committed. (Hillary Clinton's Lawyer, Vince Foster's, 'suicide', for instance.)

This story depicted a cold-blooded plan and execution of Justice that the perp knew would have been denied by our legal system because PC faggots have lobotomized Lady Justice.

Very worthy of the five stars that I gave it.

Finally, a JPB story that I can rate at least *4. Hope you aren't a one shot kind of guy Bob.

...great retribution story. Hope he goes after her other boyfriends. 5 stars. Thanx!

Loklie

Here's another story that could keep gong. Kinda like a revaluation it keeps coming back around. Beware to all of you who thinks hes gods gift to (married) women your day is coming soon.

All the ostriches here that bury their heads in the sand that nothing like this could happen? Highly trained people aren't capable of things like this? Really?? Let me give you an example: A Seal sniper took out a Somali Pirate when they were holding the crew of a cargo ship for ransom. The Seal sniper took the shot from a small boat bouncing around in rolling waves on the open sea. The sniper hit a head shot from one small moving boat to another small moving boat. The movie Captain Phillips documented it. Yeah, they are THAT good.

JPB, you've turned into such a sad, pathetic one-trick pony.....time to drop the toaster in the tub there, buddy.

...but it was a feel-good story if ever I saw one!

Has to read this again. For obvious reasons, my very favorite JPB story.

you want a wordy in-depth look at character development. their rise and fall.

and sometimes you just want a 'feel good' story where the shitty people of the world get taken out by a psycho.

because in all honesty....spouses that cheat...and the people willing to fuck married people in their marital bed...are a net negative for society. imagine the fall outs involved. if children were in the equation. children that become dysfunctional adults.

root and stem. tear it outta society. feels good to read it.

The comments were all interesting, a veritable miscellany of weird people there! Good read, thank you, a bit like a Hercule Poirot ending but I enjoyed it, Thank You!

5 well deserved *****

Gave this one 4 pointy things. Oddly enough, not really for the story, but for the somewhat disparate comments and the story!

Were we all reading the same words?

Overall a very fair existential experience!

Good story but it doesn't take 3 hours to fly 400 miles!

How fast you think a Cessna 172 is? Figure air speed of about 130 something statute mph. Call it 135 on a good day. With no wind that's 2.96 hours. Seems close enough to call it 3 does it not?

Factor in anything but a tail wind and it could be well over 3 hours.

Five Stars for one of your best!

Diving toward the airport you might get 135k knts out of a 172. More like 100 knots . straight and level. Use a Mooney M22, 160 knts easy. Use a BMW K1200 much quieter than a Harley.

I think I would have put a round in each hand, elbow, foot, knee and shoulder before two in the head. But then I am a softy.