All Comments on 'Goodbye to the Past Pt. 06'

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BigrimmstalesTooBigrimmstalesTooabout 5 years ago
Not to everyone's taste

OK, You've taken me through tattooing, alcohol, smoking, pot and cocaine. None of those are things I find a turn-on at all, yet I'm sure there are readers out there who do. It got a bit heavy that scene with the white stuff and I'm not sure it really added anything. Had Angela just tested with baking powder great but when it's then seen as something she and her 'family' are regularly using, it took the erotic edge off and personally became sleazy as far as I was concerned. Yes, I know there are a lot of toffs and nouveaux riche out there who indulge but it left this reader cold. I guess I've seen too much of the misery when people can't handle it and are in the gutter.

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I put my first piece out here in early 2017 to scratch an itch. Now I am addicted and have published 60 stories. My lifestyle has changed in the last year or so and it is now not as easy for me to write my sordid filth when the whim strikes me. However I have a few stories nea...

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