All Comments on 'Goodbye to the Past Pt. 07'

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BigrimmstalesTooBigrimmstalesTooabout 5 years ago
An enjoyable romp

Bar my reservations re the drug taking and the tattoos that I find non-erotic, you corrected some of that with the slight morality piece re the call girl in rehab. I liked the use of humour that has run throughout this, with nice referencing of the regional accents adding to the mix. Could see this going further as still want to know what Amelie gets up to with Cait, and although usually I'm happy to let the imagination take the strain in this case I feel it would be better written/'seen' through your imaginings. Great writing as ever.

Beejay3Beejay3over 1 year ago

Wow,what a protracted sexual fantasy! Sex….sex…sex…and more

I guess the word is “Insatiable!”

Sounds lIke “Never …Never Land!”

Sorry to see it end!

Thank you

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I put my first piece out here in early 2017 to scratch an itch. Now I am addicted and have published 60 stories. My lifestyle has changed in the last year or so and it is now not as easy for me to write my sordid filth when the whim strikes me. However I have a few stories nea...

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