All Comments on 'Gosh! Ch. 03'

That was fucking hilarious

A little slow to start but a complete crack up towards the end. And hot too! Congrats on a graet story! More More! lol

Having read this story over, I too have noticed it really does change half way through and is a bit of a sleeper - thanks to those of you who stay with it and particularly to those who vote - thanks

SN

Sir Nathan ...

I have loved your Gosh story since Chapter 1 ... the improbability of it all makes it that much more funny - but erotic at the same time ... i'm looking forward to the scene with the mechanics ... *grin*

Green

especially the black guy with the weird name and the annoyingly large cock, I love it!

Another brilliant, um, submission from Sir Nathan!! While the author's notes were a hoot, as well as Ishmael, my favorite part had to be

'while producing handcuffs from somewhere that the author couldn't be bothered explaining'

Thanks again, Sir Nathan!!

~~beth claire

Awwwhhhhhh....

You need to finish the story!

=^.^=

Keep writing you are good

Please write a couple of prequels for gosh! 1, maybe a chapter for beastly or how it all began for cindy lol thanks for these submissions they are great, amazing storytelling.