All Comments on 'Gothic Man'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
bad girl

You are a very bad girl for having such perverted thoughts. Place some large elastic bands around your breasts and keep them on while you write the next story about this couple. DO IT NOW!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
awesome

this was awesome! I totally loved it. I loved it since you first mentioned Cruxshadows, which is one of my favorite bands. I'm a bbw girl myself, and this story was like a fantasy of mine

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Love your Gothic-themed stuff!

. . how about a story involving Elegant Gothic Lolita outfits - which look fantastic on BBW gals - and Japanese rope bondage? Mmmmm!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great Story

First time I've ever left a comment. Very well written story, horny as hell, good pace, erotic tension, interplay between characters as well as the BBW as a main character rather than the usual stick thin glamour model.

An ordinary woman can relate to this story.

Well done, keep writing.

NyarlasNyarlasover 15 years ago
Beautiful!

A work of art, my dear.

Thank you :)

KittykittykatgirlKittykittykatgirlabout 12 years ago

Wow,l. Now I'm not into being dominated by any man, I prefer to dominate them but this was pretty yummy

MasterJohn6969MasterJohn69695 months ago

I could see this being turned into a multipart story that had your Goth girl being taken even deeper down the rabbit hole.

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