All Comments on 'Gotta Stop Misbehavin', or Not'

by SolidHeartNotCock

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ptebadenptebadenalmost 6 years ago
Very good writing

I like your style, how you tell each detail. The story is very short but can be continued.

whiteasianlvrwhiteasianlvralmost 6 years ago
A Primal Story

There's something primal about your submission - to being spanked by your girlfriend and then, taken anally, by her. The mental aspects of human sexuality are so often overlooked....and yet they are equally or more powerful than the physical. I'd love to hear more from you in a manner that would show greater power transference to Dora.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great story

This is a good first story.

The detail was very good. This could go many different directions.

I hope you write more story’s.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The belting is a bit severe I would have preferred a long hard hand spanking

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