All Comments on 'Government Dog Pt. 01'

I really enjoyed this chapter, it's a nice start to a new story, gives a few mysteries to go on but gives enough away to hook the reader. The prose flows well, didn't notice any major issues of spelling or grammer. Plus I love pet play especially non-con pet play so this really works for me as a reader. Hope you continue on from this good start and we see more of this story. Keep up the good work :)

5/5 stars