All Comments on 'Grace & the Mystery Rider'

Good job! I like the rustic feel of it. Flanks! Ha! How very farmish! I really liked the story. You explained everything at just the right parts. I'd like to read more of your stuff, if it's all this good.

sweet and tender versus wild and erotic at all the right parts, the perfect ending and a wonderful story!

keep writing!

and well written...just a lovely love story. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

I loved this, it was just so cute and sweet! Somewhere in the story it made even me want to have children, and I've NEVER wanted children before. I guess a good story can change a person. If I have kids, I blame Grace!

In that time frame nearly every woman in her situation with a dead husband would have been forced into prostitution. She would have been to if not for Justin's rescues.

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Due to several really reading experiences I have been avoiding "Western" and 18th century online stories. Having read this I may try others. I like this story, it isn't "Wonderful" or "Fantastic" but it is a good read and an interesting take on how to get the girl without her knowing it.

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I have read a couple of your stories and I must say u r indeed a versatile writer. I like how u think and your inovation. One thing I noticed though is when the couples start having sex there is no flow from the story into the sex. It comes across to me like the woman just decides to have sex with a complete stranger who have assisted her a couple of times. There is no relationship building in the stories. The same thing occured in the story with the girl by the beach and the dog tore her bikini top. Anyway all the same I enjoy your stories and will contine to read them all

But a bit predictable. Well paced and draws you into the story.

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loved how he just seemed to appear when she needed help....a touching and tender story of unfolding love....nice one...

I am really enjoying your stories.

..... with the last comment. All of this writer’s stories are great. Only wish they were still being written.

Well, well, another great little story & yet another happy ending.

Could get used to this ! Thanks for doing your bit to restore a little bit of faith in humanity.

A nice surprise ending.

Too good to be true, but who cares? We all need a little positive fantasy to keep us going. 4*

Justin is a real gem -- and honest gentleman who wins Grace honestly, by helping her and falling involve with her. When they are stripped and making love, I imagine the sexy rancher Justin as a hairy-chested muscular, loving gentleman. Please write more! Love your stories!

Another great example of your ability to make a story feel real thanks again.

I enjoy reading stories very much!

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Really enjoyed this, Dr Feelgood! Found only the second literal in some 40 stories of yours that I.have read so far, which is not typical of the Literotica genre. On page one you use the word 'garrett' when I'm sure, in the story's context, you meant 'garment"