All Comments on 'Grace's New Life'

You need to develop a relationship with an editor, to help you with punctuation. Your love of commas is ruining the beginnings of an OK story.

Seems as if you are slamming her husband...was that the intent. "She realized she had married the first man she had slept with and although she had lived a pleasant life, she now wondered what she had missed out for all those years."

It appeared she went into this with respect and love for her deceased husband and now she questions whether she should have married him at all or what she missed by marrying him.....that seems pretty sad! I usually like your stories but this one left me cold and unhappy.