by fexcellent452
I'm sorry I didn't realize I hit the wrong submission category, I'm trying to figure out how to fix it. Really, I'm sorry I hadn't intended to irritate people by putting this in the wrong category.
Thisis a really good start. Maybe fill in a bit more info. The end was a bit 'quick'. I don''t what's with all the 'haters' in here, Not productive at all.
I hope you do continue with Jude and Connor.