All Comments on 'Graffiti Revenge'

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 6 years ago
I'd love to hear what happens

To Rebeca and Michelle, if anything! Very enjoyable story.

Geon54Geon54over 6 years ago
Viewpoint

As far as I know your stories are all from the male or female viewpoint, never from both. I can't help but think it might be interesting to have one from both, as long as there is a wide enough difference in attitude to make the contrast amusing.

While this story is perfectly fine as it stands, a sequel from Rebecca or Michelle's POV might be fun, where they replay the initial encounter and struggle (?) with the decision to return to the scene of the crime. (Maybe even return together?)

ronexearonexeaalmost 4 years ago
Right up my street!

Well done. Another imaginative story, well told.

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