by V.Rich
Hot hot hot....where do you get this stuff?? Is Graham still available?? Please I want his e-mail... please please.
i loved it, a story within a story, slow to start but a white hot fire. more, please tell me more of what is in store for Graham. i wish he could be loaned out, i would have him pay a visit to my apartment. please give me the address to the real ritz poodle. i make to sfo sometimes i know this place is real.
keep up the great writing.
An excellent story with great attention to detail. As one poster mentioned, several stories within the main story keep the reader's attention focused.
Allusions to well known works are also clever and interesting. A VERY good contrast between the environment of the New Ritz Poodle Dog Club and the waiters. I would like to read more about this setting and its waiters, with great detail regarding the "dichotomy" between its workers, environment, and patrons.