All Comments on 'Grandma and Physical Therapy'

The word you are looking for is Except not Expect. Just a point. Good story though

I rated this story a 3 because even though it was worthy of a 5 the mistakes made brought it down. If you were to simply slowly reread what you write I think you have a future at writing very good stories.

way too many grammar mistakes, you need an editor or two.

keep up the great work!

Did you even proof read this? If yes then get an editor. ** due to the constant errors for it killed the mood trying to figure out what you meant to say.

Proof your work before posting. It takes a lot away from the story when the reader needs to spend half their time rereading sentences to determine what you meant to write.

So yeah there's errors. But that story is hot. I want a fat granny to bang.

Awesome story. I may be 68 years old but I would definitely enjoy sex with a woman older than me. I've seen many women in their 70's and 80's that are still incredibly hot.

Great story

Loved the story was a great read please keep writing

Oh hell yeah, especially from the sleep over invitation, nice!