All Comments on 'Grandma Fran Keeps Her Promise Ch. 02'

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sexymeupsexymeupover 6 years ago
lot of action

the story seemed ok, but, to me, it seems to me you made the boys and banker sound like retards. the boys at 18 sounded like 14-year-olds that weren't very bright. I see you have a ch 2 but I going to pass on that, your characters sound like little kids, not my cup of tea, just my opinion gave it 2 stars.

bigmg2000bigmg2000over 6 years ago
Good Story

I hope Fran does more with the boys such as wears some sexy clothes, introduces them to anal and maybe helps more of their friends. Also BDSM?

Scorpion46yScorpion46yabout 1 year ago

Nice story so far, but a little hard to follow.From grandson to son in law, to grandson's friend, to both boys, to banker. Let the 2 boys have her again and turn the tables by having them in charge with a spit roast ending in a DP she wasn't expecting. And let's not leave out the mom.

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