All Comments on 'Grandma Shares with a Friend'

Great story with a guilty feeling horny grandma and a sick kid with a huge asset. Grandma's dyke friend MUST join in with them. Maybe the friend could peg the grandson while he does grandma?

It's hard to get past a typo in the first sentence.

Writer's resources? It's a fucking typo, drama queen. A he instead a she you can't get past and has ruined your weekend?

Sorry you soiled yourself over than missing s, but since it seems half the writers here don't know a your from a you're or a to from a too, I suspect your days are full of equally compelling commenting. Carry on.

By the way, I enjoy valid criticism and comments good or bad and never remove them, but let's not nitpick.

Want her friend to take him as much as his grand mother

Good story. Hope there's a part two with Ms. Weber!

Didn't even see the typo in the first sentence. Did see the second one, and could care less.

Good story line, good read. Thank you for your efforts and bring out part 2.

Regarding a typo in your story. I read the story, enjoyed it and only when I saw the cryptic comment did I go back notice the typo. I write here also and I will freely admit that some errors have slipped in. The form you submit on has different font than what you submit on and the errors show up more clearly on the published product. That typo would not have been caught with spell check

I've read plenty of stories here that are riddled with errors. It's an amateur site and is FREE. I bought a Stephen King book quite a while back that had two transposition errors on one page but I didn't complain or ask for my money back. Nobody who writes here wants to screw up. Mistakes happen and this one did not affect the story to any great degree.

Wise ass comments like that are why many authors here don't allow anonymous comments and delete those that aren't complimentary.

great story. Cannot wait until chapter two when I hope he meets her friend

Hmmmm my cocks so damm hard right now I’d so so so love to fuck a grandma and her mate I’d do anything they asked me to Anything and the filthier the better I’m gonna go wank this monster and yes mature granny’s it is a monster Long and approx 6 in thick so anyone want Adult fun for several hours msg me or email me @ Karlos.69.kleijn@gmail.com

great reading but was hoping to read what happened with grandma's friend

Nice story write more and bring in the friend