by Black Tulip
this is more about mind control theme or non consentual theme than it about Mature.
Lily’s being influenced by the past and unable to resist the older man was very erotic. Leaving the reader to imagine what he would do with her when they were alone was very effective. It's a 5.
Some stories don’t fit perfectly into any category and I think this one fit into Mature as well as it would have fit into any other category.
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Damn, BT. That was GOOD!
The whole story was so erotic and sensual from beginning to end.
Such a pleasure to read.
hey great read here sweets...sorry i have been gone so long that i am just now reading it!
loved it though!
;)
kisses,
T
Very sensual and erotic as the intensity builds. I would love to see it build some more and get go a bit over the edge or at least right to the edge before he beds her. BT you are a talented writer.
Mr. Gentleman
A smart beggining, to a much needed addition to her wardrobe. Any chance for more ?