All Comments on 'Grandma's Rituals'

Not trying to ask you to steer away from your main thought line..How about some Lactation and multiple partner games like a MFF and so on? Thanks for the story. Good one.

not good. an old women, grandma, is not erotic attractive. why dont you write some story where mother and son alone in the house? a son never get attract to an old lady, no way. he can feel attraction for a middle age women only and mother is the close women to him. sirajahmed you are now only indian writer who continue write indian mom son story. but if you continue write this kind of disappoint story than how it could be well? please write well hot mother son incest love story like "exams". maa aur bete ko kahani mey avasshi akele hona chaiye.

Add aftermath, how was the life and how they managed with dad being in home...

You don't need to improve it all ignore those other cowards. Your story is amazing as it stands thanks for telling it.

excellent please continue this story further ur an amazing author

This is an exciting ,erotic-exotic- story!

Under all cicumstances please next part !!

Please continue

you are one of my favorite authors. why were you away for so long after your series of Talk, Hanky, Exams, Saturday etc. Please continue.

many many thanx.Keep going.

please continue...

man you should continue this story......it would be a tragic if this fine story ends here!!!

hoping to read the nxt part soon

Once again awesome story by an excellent writer.

I am a die hard fan of your stories. I have read all your stories many a times. Actually I am in relation (sexincest) with my own devar (brother in law). So we together read your stories during our hot lovemaking sessions. Actually we fantasize and role play characters of your stories, to add hotness in our relation.

As an Indian lover and reader, we together (me and my devar) believe that nothing more erotic than incest-taboo and forbidden love.

As an incest couple, we thought, if this story had detailed description of religious ceremony before or during love-making, it would add more spice. For example if you could include Pooja (Prayer of God), some chants, some religious rituals than it would be PERFECT scenario for this kind of story.

Once again your stories are fuel to our hot & forbidden relation.

Keep it up.

hi please continue it is going great

gd one please continue the story, wann to see the grand mother fucked and 3some also

This story is great, pls keep going make it a saga

all the best

GREAT WITHOUT ANY WORD !!!!! U HAVE EXELLENT TATENT TO WRITE SUCH A MARVLOUS MOTOR SON STORY. KEEP IT UP & CONTIUNE WRITING

Let's have some more with grandma and her friend. Loved it.

great work as usual, plz. bring new stories also and increase your productions lot of ur fans wait for new stories at least 6 in a year

Siraj is amazing in his art of writing. He has the nack to build the tease. Great great great work of sensuality.

how long are you going to keep us waiting, man.....this is cruel....and plz add more lewd dialogues to this amazing and one of the best stories I have ever read.......

Though a bit exaggerated, the author has lyrically told a good story. Incest among Gogodi tribe of Golkonda is not rare even now, I can vouch, as my mom belong to this tribe.

GOOD STORY, FRIEND!

really appreciate your work.

very very nice and hot story. when i read this story, i discharg 2 to 3 time in a day. i read this story in 6 dayes. i alwayes waitting this writher,s stories.(Sara From Pakistan).

Please go on and on...we're waiting...let them have children -- a couple of them at the least!

Story is highly rated. Mystery to me. After the first paragraph I tuned out. No subtlety there

I would suggest the next day, Alka and her son have a bath together, and come out totally nude, where her ma and her best friend then jin and tease them; then Alka describes the vents of the night,pointing out where her son did things to her, she points at her sexy buttocks and describes the sexy ass fucking from her son. They sing songs teasing the couple. Then various perfumes are put on the couple. They dress sexily and are taken to the river. There mom and son copulate in front of Ma and best friend.

You are surely my favourite writer. Being an Indian reader, I am fond of the stories which involves indian character and all these desi plots.

Thanks for coming back.

Reagrds, OMG592.

You must continue the story and continue in your own manner that would be awsome

Please ..please continue...one of the best stories ...in fact all your stories are pretty awesome

No doubt that this is one of the best story I had read. It well crafted well narrated stroy....all portions are well planned ....moreover it had a very sound base to bring many such more episodes of this story.......keep going....this will surely thrill readers...........

Please continue the story with his grandmother, his mother and her friend with him.

This storie reflect what any natural human been should have gone by if religions have not corrupt a way of life. Grand mother and mothers are supposed to teach children every things important about life. The most important been life in marriage, love making, survival technics, social behaviour and work ability. Thoses lessons must must be as pratical as possible. Religions have completely corrrupted human been natural way of life. The only interdict in incest practise shall be procreation or having children.

Incest lovemaking is in everyone mind, it frees one mind completely to inimaginable freedom.

Awsome... I know not many has commented or voted, but I would deerly like more too come.... pls pls pls...

u hv killer ideas pls continue and add grandma to the scene

nice one..... great

Yes please add more with the grandma and mother!!

Very wonderful story. About a mother taking her son to experience the way of life she was brought up in. An alien culture to me, though very titillating. Your description in your broken English made it difficult to follow and I'm afraid I did not get the full effect of the story. The gambling game was totally dropped, though 'ma' said it played a very important part of her village life. You are very vague about his status as king. If he is the only male of age in the village, would it not be his responsibility to mate and impregnate each woman there - to insure the survival of their culture? And by the way, have you not had anal sex? If you had, you'd know how important extra lubrication really is or it can really hurt or damage her and even rub a man raw. Learn about punctuation and how/when to use quotation marks. Learn, learn, learn. Keep working, I got so horney while reading this.

Will you please post the next part. This is the best Indian story ever!

Nicely written... gradual and slow take off..

Your story took a minute to get going, but once it did, it was worth the effort to read. Now you must continue with the development of Vinit and expand his sexual role to the tribe to include his grandmother as well as making it a group effort with all three women together; both with and without him. Also, introduce more erotica rituals from grandma's heyday.

One of the best stories read till now .mother fucking is the best fucking

dear

this is I very nice story .I would like if you add funding of his grand mother and other family ladies .it will add spice in the story.

thanks and regards

Rajesh

....I did not find these chapters erotic. I got bored with the repetition. Vinit, Mom, Ma saying over and over and over the pleasure ...how did it feel ...was it and was it not good. I had to skip forward to write this. I will admit I didn't finish this story.

I've read shorter stories that had me hanging for more. Single chapters. More power to the people that found this entertaining.

Please continue your story..Tell us about grandma and mom threesome.how they love to be explored by him.about thier anal fantasy.

Mina nikkusin oma ema mitu aastat juba.Minu vanaema oli joodik ja lits aga ma käisin emaga tal sünnipäeval.Võtsime napsu parajalt ja läksime magama.Öösel ma nikkusin ema ja siis tuli .parajal ajal sisse vanaema.Vanaema ütles et ta teadis seda ammu juba et me omavahel kepime.Vanaema keeras ringi ja käskis edasi keppida,ta enam ei sega meid.

please continue your erotic story with grand mother and friend of mother .a group sex will be a great entertainer .

Thanks for contributing such a nice and sexy story .

This desperately needs an editor. I couldn't get pass the first page with all the grammatical mistakes.

Also, the son speaks unusually formally for a boy raised in the city. It was jarring.

The reason this story is unique is because sexual partners having sex talk about other people during sexual encounters. And not just about other people but about family members! Loved it. Got to have second part, Siraj sahab

One of the best story

Very much enjoyed the story. Your English is getting there, still a bit odd to read which I find distracting. Nonetheless, I appreciate longer stories where the plot builds and this one was excellent. Some of your expressions do not fit well and a better understanding of the vernacular along with the use of current idioms would improve the read.

I would suggest reading other stories by native English speakers to improve those points. But don't stop writing, your stories are unique in many ways, I really like the introduction of other cultures and social norms, those aspects really give your stories another dimension so, well done!

All of the stories by this author come closes to the foreplay of the Kama Sutra. So wonderful to read. thank you.

Dude please write it further.. waiting for the part when he takes his grandma’s ass

Excellent