All Comments on 'Grandmother and Winter Break'
by zooker69
- 7 Comments
Eric_Shiftabout 11 years agoEven though these are very short, they don't come across as rushed. They could be expanded a bit, but just to add length to them.
Well done.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoYou should probably look up the difference between "taunt" and "taut". You did that in both stories. Details like that are distracting.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoGrandmother and Winter Break is a much-needed sequel to the Grandmother and Summer Break. It brims and overflows with grace and sensuality as partners across generations team up to explore and enjoy the carnal cravings.
This team-up is unique and unparalleled, as it combines experience with expertise, besides erotica with energy. That is why Grandma welcomes her Grandson not just with open arms but open legs as well.
On the one side is the seasoned and sensuous Grandma, competing with the energy, curiosity and desire of Grandson. When the twain meet, doors of heavenly bliss open up, locked up between the legs of the Grandmother.
As a Grandma stretches her legs apart, it is invitation to the Grandson to enter the Garden of Eden. The author would do well to keep the series going. Ramesh. Ramesh69691@outlook.com
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