by Sylviafan
I liked the premise. Could use some polishing, but a good story. More chapters?
I thought it was really good. Might have been better with a little more foreplay during the time on sofa, but it's your story and a good one so what do I know? About to check if you have other submissions. That alone should describe my opinion of your story. I vote 5.
A really lovely story and we'll written mate please add some more
It's Ok, but I saw some dialogue (that I've seen in other stories) that doesn't sound natural. The fact that their decision is partly drug influenced kind of dampens it, in my opinion.
As for Mafias comment , as a man that went through the 60's & 70's in the USA , there was great satisfaction in getting stoned and having a great sexual connection . Mafia must.have never tried it . It is a great story . Great build up .
I would have loved to get tipsy and high with my Nana. The ol' gal did like her gin...
Well written and I like your taste in lingerie!!!
Great work - thank you!
Well,in the first place, grandmother sex is awesome. In the second place, stoned sex is great too. This is well done - if a tad bare of details and a bit incomplete. I'm not always a fan of making all tales a series. For some, a single tableau of an experience is all that is needed. Here, though, a little more would be welcomed.
I really enjoyed your story! I found it to be well written and the build up was very good! Looking forward to reading more chapters!! Thanks for sharing.
Cheers
Lance
Great story. We don't realise how much sex older people want. l am 75 years old and l still enjoy sex with my daughter and grandaughter.
Keep writing and l will follow your stories.
I met a very glamorous 85 yr old woman online and met up and started dating. Wasnt long before she suggested bed and now we live together. Im 19 the sex is mind blowing.she cabt get enough. I still take her out on romantic dates.
the only part that did not ring true was the amount of wine they drank and grass they smoked their first evening. Three bottles of wine and five joints for two people is enough to render them unconscious.
I'm a 67 year old Grandmother of six grandchildren. The eldest grandson is 19 and comes to cut my grass and other odd jobs. We started fucking and I really enjoy his visits.
The story was great and I can relate to it. My mother was an only child and her mother came to live with our family in the late 1940's, ostensibly to "dry her out".
She dressed well. I saw her nude several times and watched her pee numerous times.
My mother passed about three years after granny moved in with us and I didn't realize what a cocksman my father was until one morning I was going downstairs and granny came out of his bedroom to come upstairs. Daddy was fucking her. He was out of town on business and I came home from school and she was completely intoxicated.
I got her up to her bedroom and pulled her dress over her head and saw she had pissed her panties as well as her stockings. Needless to say we made a few bargains when she woke up from her drunken stupor and she was mine too for the duration of her stay with us.
I spent about five years living with my grand parents. And, when 'dad' would drink she taught me all I needed to know about to take care of her.
I knew of an old lady of 87having sex with ber 17yr old great grandson .they alsodated and ended up living together
Nice to read the Queen's English in an erotic piece. Well done!
There must be a sequel they have so many potential adventures together - loved the story so far?
Mafia Patriarch is exactly right; the drug-fuelled nature of the sex does somewhat trivialise it. More concerning, though, is the background detail. You write "..I hadn't seen the old girl for some years, in fact since weekend visits stopped being compulsory" and then almost immediately "..she had been widowed for nearly ten years". It sounds rather as though the visits stopped when Grandad started pushing up the daisies. Do you not think that the narrator's mother would be concerned enough about her widowed mother to keep sending the grandson round? Perhaps the visits stopped when Grandma got herself a lover - but I think this is not mentioned in the story? It's important to have everything hang together. There's a story somewhere on here that has 'Soccer Mom' in the title and then goes on to describe events at a game of American football.
That was beautiful!!! Wh says the more mature lady cannot fuck as well as any younger woman...I've just come off big time reading your wonderful story!!! Now I'm going to collect my older sister-in-law from the station...who knows what may happen on our return?
Liked the story, but hate the use of drugs. I have never used them and I don't think it ruined my sex life at all. Just see no need for the vile stuff.
Just a comment to enlighten some. You do realize that alcohol is also a drug. So no drinks, or wine either I guess!!
A nice beginning to a story line with great potential. An encouraging start to an erotic relationship with a Grandmother and Grandson with the degree of anticipated desire to lead to a lasting relationship for years to come. By all means, keep string going, please.
Wonderful. Sight not site. Vagina is too clinical. Pussy is better in this context.
Awesome story that give me hope. Perhaps one day I'll be able to write my own stories
Mom read a few stories and loved them all. I suggested she get a decent IPad and her own subscription. I think we have a convert. Seventy something and she is getting a new life. Thanks. We are more open about such things now.
My dear daughter was surprised when I informed her that I already had and account here. I still love the ling she shared with me. Loved this story and I see there are more. Good news.
Lovely to read of older ladies still enjoying sexual and fulfilling their needs. Thank you.
This is a very beautiful story and so welcome. The picture of a young, virile man and his sexy grandmother made this grandmother's pussy drip. Thank you.
Very arousing story. Made even better as my Mum is called Sylvia. Fond memories
Great story. I pretended the grandmother was actually Sandi Patty and it got me off.
Absolutely hot as fucking he’ll! Gotta love a hot horn granny and a young grandson scratching her sexual needs long & hard!
An absoultly fucking hot story would like to read more about Grandmother's bed in another chapter maybe...........03/11/23
This is a great story !!
Never question the sexual abilities of an older woman.
My 87 year old lover Esther is a tiger in bed. I always lick her pussy first, she loves it and comes several times.
She eagerly welcomes my throbbing cock deep into her hungry cunt.
Esther is an incredible lover, I always want her to cum over and over before I pump her pussy with shot after shot of my cum.
My cock gets hard whenever I think of her !!
Steve
This story was well developed and actually very realistic. i know older ladies are frequently more excited aboy sex than younger women. A fun read.
yes sexy grandma sexy and very willing555555555555555555555, looking forward to reading more of grandmothers bed 2. got me nice and hard.