All Comments on 'Grandmother's Joy Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Question about ages

Enjoyed story, but have question about age of Grandmother?

Grandson is 18; Mother was 20 when impregnated, that was 38 years ago. Grandmother is 52, so she was 13 or 14 when she had daughter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
died

The story died a fast death within a few lines, due to the author not having any knowledge of basic human anatomy. Its NOT "aureoles" but "areloa, areolae, or areolas" either learn the proper medical and anatomy terms.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Story is confusing......

"His father had violated his bond with me and taken his mother by accident......"

Confusing as hell. Did you even graduate from high school?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Rubbish

silver dollars,pencil erasers , same old same old

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 9 years ago
OK. I enjoyed it.

I did understand the language, but I suck at math anyway.

Would like continuation about son and grandma.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Ya, the math of this threw me off!

Agree with the previous post about the ages of the characters! Also, it was difficult to take it seriously when Grandma was groping his "gentiles". Author, please note the correct word is "genitals".

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hot

just did some editing of my own work and another's the other day and it renewed my appreciation for good stylized story-telling. this was a good read. it is easy to forget about the voice you meant to use. good use of position prepositions and verbs. I could visualize everything happening very well.

newtype2525newtype2525over 9 years ago
Amazing work!

Please don't slow down now! Write on and bring more great and exciting works for us! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Is this it for Grandmother's Joy?

What are your plans to revisit story?f87b

charliebillcharliebillover 7 years ago
Very erotic!

I loved the idea of him fucking her, not knowing it was not his wife. Glad she got pregnant, my special fetish!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Old grandmother

This is a true story believe it or not my 94 year old grandmother still live by herself I would check on her a few times a week one time when I stop by to check on her she started telling me she had something hanging out of her down there I asked her what she meant down there she says between my legs I asked if it was between her lips she said no I asked if it was coming out of her hole she said no I asked her if it was above her lips at the top she said yes I asked her what it was like and she described it to me she said sometimes when she sat in the chair it hurt I asked her if she was sitting on it now and she said yes I told her just by describing it I didn't know what it was she asked if I seen it wood I know I said maybe she got up and went into the bedroom and then in a short time called me to come in there when I went in there was grand mom sitting on the side of the bed with no pants or panties on well I was surprised at that I said I guess you want to show me what you have between your legs and she said yes I reached up and started to unbutton her top telling her you can show me everything you have At first she said no don't do that but then she gave in I took her top off herself I told her to lay back on the bed and lay down and put her legs apart ver I had my 94 year old grandmother completely naked laying on the bed with her legs spread to my surprise she didn't look too bad her tits were saggy but she still had some big nipples and she still had a fair amount of pussy hair and it wasn't all gray I lifted her legs up in the air and spread them there looking back at me was her clit I reach down and touch the end of it and ask her if that's what she was talking about she said yes I explained to her all women had that and it got bigger as a woman got older I rub the end of it and asked her if she could feel that she said yes I ask her how I felt she said okay I asked her if she had any type of lubricant she asked why and I explained to her you shouldn't rub it dry she said she had some KY jail in her nightstand I was surprised at that I put some KY gel on my fingers and began rubbing her clit again that time I rub not only the head but moved her Hood up and down on it I asked her how that felt and she said good as I played with it it got bigger and longer I then told her I was going to rub her pussy lips to see if they got Fuller and firmer sure enough they did I was surprised she didn't try to stop me so I spread her lips wide and got a good look at her old pussy it wasn't a pretty sight but it was a pussy I could see her hole as I did I told her she had a nice size hole yet but it looked a little dry so I sport it so k y gel in it and some between her lips I told her to put her legs down but keeping the spread and I began rubbing a finger between her lips I was surprised she didn't try to stop me soon I was at the opening of her hole at first she said don't do that I'm your grandmother why she didn't try to stop me soon I had a finger Parkway in her I must say she was tight what will heat stroke of my finger I went in deeper and deeper before long I had my finger all the way in her and began fingering her again she did not try to stop me soon she was telling me how good it felt well I decided it was time to put the cock to her I drop my pants and underwear and move to her I was rubbing my cock between her lips and she seems to be enjoying that she asked me not to put it in her has it have been over 20 years since she have had sex I told her today was her lucky day as I move my cock to the opening of our whole at first I couldn't even get the head in her that pussy was so tight however after a short time I had to head in she was telling me it hurt please be easy with her wow she was so tight it took about 5 minutes to get it all the way in her she was telling me it hurt I let it rest in her for just a short time then I started pumping in and out of her before long she started moving with me telling me it felt good then she told me to go faster harder and in her as far as I could go I was in her so deep my balls are getting her ass she started telling me how great it felt then she started saying she was coming she was coming I didn't know my grandmother would talk like that don't you let out with a loud yell and wraps her legs around me as hard as you could yelling she was coming she was coming she beg me to shoot my load in her telling me to fill her pussy with my load well it didn't take long before I shot my load in her she she told me how good it felt for me to drop my load in her As We Lay There I began feeling her old tits and nipples she had nipples the size of silver dollars and as I played with them I could feel them getting hard she told me to go ahead and suck on them I took turns with each nipple and they got as hard as a rock and I could stretch them way out as I suck on them she took my hand and put it between her legs again I told her I could not get a hard-on for a while she says that was okay just use my finger again well I first I just use one finger then I decided to try to fingers well that hole stretch out enough for me to get two fingers in there and finger her she was enjoying that I decided to try one more finger three fingers in her to my surprise I was able to get three fingers in her not all the way but part way she started telling me she was coming again and I felt that pussy get soaking wet then she just laying there smiling at me well my fingers we're still went and moved up and I reach down and found her ass hole and began massaging that she said oh no don't do that but it was too late I had a finger in her ass she yelled at first and started crying however I continue to finger her in just a short time she was telling me she was going to come again and she did well that was enough for one day after that I would have her from time to time when I went to see her I even forced her to let me drop my load in her ass I would lean her over the table pull her dress up and panties down and off and make her spread her legs of course I had to use Lube but I got to the point where it was easy to get in her I guess you could say I made my grandmother my own sperm bank a few times I made her suck me off and swallow my load

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