by MisterReason
This is a very, very hot story. The only thing I'd change is that the grandfather is a bit too nice on her. If he wants her ass, he should take it. I was disappointed when he didn't. He should take advantage of her youth and his power position and what better way that to give it to her up the ass?
All in all, it was hot. Please write more!
WOW. . . what a story! I loved the descriptions of how tight she was-- wonderful. All of your work is terrific, and I'm glad you're writing again! This one is especially well written. I hope you write again.
Even better than the first chapter! Keep them coming and so will I!!!
Chapter 2 is even better than the beginning. Love your detailed descriptions and wonderful visualizations. More.......please more.
backwoodsman
I love how she's going from this meek little girl to a dominant, incest-obsessed cockslut!
I'm really enjoying you storys. I'm a "Fluffy" woman kinda guy. I like some meat on them. But I find the way you discribe these girls, I would like to get a bunch of that pussy myself.
Thanks for some good reads here.