All Comments on 'Grandpa and the Nanny'

how to write, spell, punctuate and PROOF READ.

"you're" is ONLY a shortened form of YOU ARE. It cannot be used in any other way!!!!!!

In this instance the apostrophe shows that a letter is missing, in the case the 'A'!!

Grammar is important and you could do with tidying some of it up.

This is still a good and hot story, though - please continue! Loving the flashbacks with Pepper as well.

More please, love this storyline

The next chapter will be exciting when the son and father have sex...keep up the good work.

To all those people who like to run down other people’s effort’s

and starting pulling apart their spelling and grammar and

then don’t have the balls to submit it using their login detail’s

and hind behind the “Anonymous” banner, I say this “ Put up or STFU!! ”

If you can do better!! Then let’s be seeing your effort’s....

And I've got the "balls " to sign my name to a comment

he's 88 i don't think so .its all in his mind.