All Comments on 'Grandpa's Angel'

The pregnancy portion is so unbelievable and impossible, read a 9th grade biology book

You know nothing of sex or getting pregnant. Nothing here could happen. From the fake nursing home and only the men getting in trouble to a virgin taking sick like that in any hole with no preparation. To the joke that sperm goied directly in the womb or a cervix has walls. Cervix can not be open while pregnant as that is what cause labor. Can get pregnant like she did or have multiple births like she did. Cocks aren't purple and balls aren't blue. So are they aliens on a different planet or what?

how was this even published?? I'm still trying to figure this out. this can get published, but the one I wrote can't??? smh not good...

You’ll forget you’re reading it. Worked for me.

Keep up the Great work I think you have a Wonderful Imagination

Really bad writing and the end made no sense. Funny read though.

Nothing more to say than SICK SHIT!!!

The writer has no idea how human reproduction works.....

Wow... I don't realy know what to say other then plz just stop writing stories... And if you have to take it to the deep web... as much as I like messed up stories I think this one went way too far

Horrible, stupid, and useless.

Was this weird? Yes. Is it "factual"? No. Was it sick? Hell yeah.

I read a lot of stories on here and most of them are so boring. It's the same things over and over. This one was so different! you really get in the fantasy mind.

I love that it was so sick but had a super happy ending. It's my style. Keep writing! Good job.

This was incredibly stupid.

Yes wish that was me having all that fun love being grandpa angel but put rubber pants on me over diaper tho have his babies all the time.starting out 14 of age have 6 other guys fill me too.mmmmmmm

maybe the stupidest story I have ever read here

Worse story ever

the beginning with the guys fking her and peeing in her was super hot

then putting her in a diaper with vibrators was super sexy

then the end got a bit weird and uncomfortable

This didn't make much sense.

And the way she introduced herself wasn't very realistic either. She might as well have said "My name is Angel, I'm 26 and my shoe size is 8". Nobody talks like that and it was kinda awkward.

Just plain fucking Bull Shit.

Honestly the whole time I was reading it I was wanting to beat the fuck out of her Grandpa and her friends I wasn't turned on at all

and also other men not family wrong category should have been reluctance/non-consent

Child, this made no damn sense. Not a lick of it. You need to go back to school to learn about how babies are made.

This story sucked….I have read handful of stories in this site but this has to be the worst one so far.

I'm going to assume the author is American

that was utterly fantastic! i loved it! sucking her nipples and eating her pussy and fucking her ... oh yes, and i love when old men suck and fuck young girls ... this is the best story I've read in a long time ... thanks for the wonderful description! ... excellent tale/tail