All Comments on 'Grandpa's Vacation Deception'

Nice build-up and just well written all round. Can't wait to read more. :)

Well written! Love the hesitation and finally relent in giving into lust! I always appreciate older men, particularly older family men. Thanks for the story.

Very well written, seth, lots of detail - love it! Your writing only continues to get better with time - like fine wine! *muah* Hope Jen, the lady who won your contest, enjoys it!

I love it. They are right. Your writing improves with each story. I can't wait to read your next one!

You totally had me until the hotel confronted them. The idea of someone working for an airline having nothing better to do then to tattle on them was silly. I've been in couple-only hotels & they don't give a rip who is staying there as long as they are adults & not bothering anybody. Anyway, just my opinion. You definitely have a talent for writing & like I said, I really loved it until that scene. Much better than most of the garbage on this site.

well wrote,waiting for next part

Great story!

This made me hot all over. This story needs a few more chapters.

As if the story flowed easy from your finger tips to the keyboard. This story could be a revealing love between two people in the exact way you wrote this. I must ask, is this based on a romantic get away between two people you know? Would have enjoyed more of the story after the vacation - you get my five rating.

Please finish this story!

Those rare mile high club stories are simply the best! Will there be more? Maybe a couples or non incest version?

Yes! That was a challenge!

part 2 please with Alice and Donald swapping

The premise is too much for me. Jen proves to be a total slut. Grandpa is worse. 1 ⭐️

Bill S.