All Comments on 'Granny Came Too'

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AxelottoAxelottoabout 6 years ago
And like THAT, she was gone...

Hope she was packed, because she just burnt all her bridges at once.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More fools?

I spotted a couple of side-jokes there; The Boner Wave and an acronym - FML. Did I miss any more?

VirmiciousKinidVirmiciousKinidabout 6 years ago
The ending...

I really liked the story till the last part. Went from 5 stars to 2 in a couple small paragraphs...

AmbivalenceAmbivalenceabout 6 years ago
So agree... that relationship just tanked.

What he'd been doing to her during these things gave the POTENTIAL to embarrass her while also maybe embarrassing him.

Here, she just fucked him over with no risk to herself.

"Hey, Chantelle, wait here... you're going to love this one."

Then get dressed and leave her.

radioman2radioman2about 6 years ago
April Fools

Fooied me. liked it

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
The logistics simply don't play out!

He set up the vacation, they couldn't get past the gate unless they were nude one day when everyone was nude but only he was nude the next day? the staff would've turned him around at the door, he would never have been allowed into the restaurant! The rest of the story was enjoyable but the ending was a gut punch to anyone that has ever been to a nude resort

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sometimes you have to go with the flow...

Yes, there are technical issues with the ending, but it made for a great read, and thoroughly enjoyable. As for the issues with the ending, sometimes you have to gloss over the technical issues and appreciate the point of the story. And this one worked well. I give the author five stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Didn’t like it at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This was just bad

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