All Comments on 'Granting Castle a Wish'

I enjoyed this as both a Literotica reader and a big Castle fan. You write quite well. However, I'd recommend you have someone with English as a first language do the final edit to make the most of your excellent writing. There were a few small errors in sentence structure and word usage. I've seen worse from many writers with English as their first language, so you have every right to be proud of your work.