All Comments on 'Gray Lake Wolves Pt. 09'

I thought this chapter seem a bit to rushed. Did her step mother's brother kill Clara's mother and they just came up with the rogue wolf story aswel and taking out her dad? So much left untold. I would have like to have read more of them getting home. I hope that in the next story we will find out about their child and Griffin's mate.

i want more of these two. i am sad about Paloma though but i love these two..they get the happily ever after

To finish. I really enjoyed this in its entirety though. Please write more about them

Ok so i really like this story right..... but ending it like that sucks i wish you would have gone on to them having the baby or something. Im feeling like i missed something .

I love your story but I think there should be an epilogue to end it with.

I feel this was a very hurried last two chapters just to answer the pleas of those that commented on hurrying up.

Short and unemotional.

They even joke and laugh and smile when there has been death.

I seriously feel that if you ever write again you need to rethink the lack of emotion when you hurry a piece.

The end seem like it was rushed.

Give us the chapters as you write them. I definitely want to find out what is going in Raven's head.

I like how you were developing the story line but the end is so abrupt.

I have to agree with others on that the ending of this story was obviously rushed. There was a lack of detail and emotion which left the ending very abrupt and unfulfilling, which saddens me because the story started off amazing and I fell in love with the plot line and characters T.T

However, I look forward to your next story because I know how good of a writer you can be! ^.^

The last two chapters sucked compared to the others. They were a total let down. You had built up a good story and you could have gone a few different ways. I get that life can get quite busy but you shouldn't feel like you need to throw something together. And that's what it seems like you did. All I can say is try not to feel pressured into hurrying up your story for the next one you want to write.

I've absolutely loved this story.. All though, like many other comments, I wish you would have taken a bit more time writing the ending.. Still loving it though <3 Can't wait to hear what's up with Raven, of course I really hope that she finds her true mate and that the story has a happy ending <3<3<3

Just wanted to stop by and say thank you for all the feedback. I'm hearing you all and I'm sorry this feels rushed and unemotional compared to the other parts. I think I'm a little lost on where I should end this because of the spin offs I have planned. This is the end from Clara's POV, but you will see them again in about 7-8 months when I pick up with Ariella's story (after Raven's). My new plan is to finish until that point and then come rework this last part. Thank you all for being so patient and kind. This is my first time writing and I'm learning as I go!

I enjoyed your story!

And I would read any follow up stories you cum up with!!!

HAPPY WRITING!

Really liked this series!!! Hope you continue to publish

Can't wait for the next series you write. I would have gladly paid to buy this in e-book form if it was slightly longer. I loved Grayson and Clara. This story pulls you in and connects you to its characters. Great job.

Yeah, I get that you thought that the ending was a little rushed, but, she has asked that you let her know if you want the next story published chapter after chapter, with the whole story already having been written, or do you want her to publish as each chapter is written. Personally, I would rather be able to read it basically all in one setting, yes, it means that we will have to wait longer to read it, but that is my opinion.

Little Red, Thank You for a wonderful story, I loved the plot and characters in the story, I thought the whole story was well written, and I thought that the grammer, spelling, and such was much better than most of what we read on here.

My Hat's Off To You,

Blessings to You & Yours.

I love this story so much, I've read it multiple times. I hope you do continue with the other characters. I'm interested to see Ravens story and just get in her mind a little bit. More than anything I would love to hear Griffins story, I was so sad when paloma died so I would like to see how he moves on front that and I do hope he ends up with Arielle, I think they'd be adorable together!!!! But anyway Littlered12 just want to say I love your stories and I hope you keep writing and sharing with us❤

1st I loved Gray & Clara's story and am one of the lucky ones who got to read it in one sitting. 2nd I can't wait for more from you and in whatever form they come in. 3rd I want to know what's up with Raven. Thank you for such a great read, it's sitting with my other favorites!

Great story and marvelous characters!

I don't care how you release the next story, chapter at a time, or, all at once, as long as you keep writing your wonderful stories!

( I don't care to read anything about Raven. )

Since it was 08/05/15 when your posted this chapter and it is now 28/04/2017 I doubt we will hear about any of the other characters and I would have loved to hear about Grif but this is lit and authors disappear all the time. Sad would have loved more on this pack. sigh.

I loved this story! Loved it. If you are going to write more, I would love to edit for you. I would even co write with you if interested? Contact me at kerrynesbitt@live.com

I found it this afternoon and it had me hooked! Definitely waiting for you to post more!

I love this story so much. I hope you write more

I enjoyed your story but I wish there was more. It feels like there are scenes missing in the story that really could've added to it and I find it strange that Clara is really only referred to as the alpha mate instead of the alpha bitch or the alpha female. It's also odd that there's no way for the wolves to communicate telepathically like you see in other were stories. It was a good story that could be great with a few adjustments and if you keep writing I'll keep reading :)

Great story. Wanting more of this series. Wanting to know how their pup is doing. Wanting to know if the other mated couples have pups of their own. Wanting to know how the pack fairs in the aftermath of the Monadnock coup de ta.

Enjoyed this thoroughly. Thank you for sharing.

Great stories and THANK YOU!!!! For once, someone finished a story! Yer awesome! 🎊