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Click here"I would have deployed it a long time ago," she replied more calmly, tugging against his grip on her wrist.
"Then why is it so hard to make that decision now?" he reasoned, releasing her arm. She threw the cup against the wall so hard the plastic shattered.
"Because my son is down in that hold!"
- COMMENTS
Jackspeed2uover 6 years agoDon't bother INCOMPLETE INCOMPLETE INCOMPLETE
Another incomplete story from an author that over estimated his abilities.
You see when writing a story you have to know the beginning, middle and end, all before you start. So what we have here is a writer who thought they could just 'wing it' through a complex storyline with no plan. Then it all starts to get to hard to make it up as it goes while still making sense.
The time between chapter publications starts to increase or the chapters get shorter. This is because the author is lost in their own story. Then they give up and disappear or write another story. In this case SIX yes SIX concurrent stories. Now they have disappeared, as of January 2017. Nine months ago.
What a waste of my time. I know it's free, but so is a dog. crapping on your front l
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hakdrakkenover 7 years agoNice job! Didn't see that coming. I thought maybe he was her little brother.
