All Comments on 'Grayson Sontang in Space Ch. 04'

Very good start to the story line I look forward to seeing more

This story is getting really interesting, more soon I hope.

Don't bother INCOMPLETE INCOMPLETE INCOMPLETE

Another incomplete story from an author that over estimated his abilities.

You see when writing a story you have to know the beginning, middle and end, all before you start. So what we have here is a writer who thought they could just 'wing it' through a complex storyline with no plan. Then it all starts to get to hard to make it up as it goes while still making sense.

The time between chapter publications starts to increase or the chapters get shorter. This is because the author is lost in their own story. Then they give up and disappear or write another story. In this case SIX yes SIX concurrent stories. Now they have disappeared, as of January 2017. Nine months ago.

What a waste of my time. I know it's free, but so is a dog. crapping on your front l

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