All Comments on 'Grayson Sontang in Space Ch. 05'

and glad of it. Looking forward to your next posting. Thanks!

bit convoluted but has immeasurable charm - thanks!

convoluted is good.

read the first chapter when it came out and have been putting it off till there was more than just a single chapter. Fun and interesting

Each chapter is better than the last, well done hope to be able to read more very soon.

I have enjoyed this very funny

The prune plot needs to take presence for a chapter or two.

I LOVE this character!! She's Han Solo, James Bond and Katniss Everdeen all in one. She doesn't 'dumb down'. She's comfortable with her sexuality and she doesn't apologize for it. I like the name too -- any reference to Susan?

There were so many chapters, each story as interesting as the other and then suddenly nothing. I hope you are okay.

I am really enjoying this story. I hope that there is more to come.

Great story!

Enjoyed it alot and I hope you continue the story!

Another incomplete story from an author that over estimated his abilities.

You see when writing a story you have to know the beginning, middle and end, all before you start. So what we have here is a writer who thought they could just 'wing it' through a complex storyline with no plan. Then it all starts to get to hard to make it up as it goes while still making sense.

The time between chapter publications starts to increase or the chapters get shorter. This is because the author is lost in their own story. Then they give up and disappear or write another story. In this case SIX yes SIX concurrent stories. Now they have disappeared, as of January 2017. Nine months ago.

What a waste of my time. I know it's free, but so is a dog. crapping on your front lawn.

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It’s so good! Don’t stop! Don’t listen to the haters! This heroine is spot on! I love everything about it, the nuanced characters, the space tech details...it’s so awesome!!

This is such an excellent story - the attention to detail coupled with real depth to the world building is such a joy; I have total confidence in your writing on this basis alone. But to then populate the story with interesting, complex and very human characters makes for a really compelling read. I love it so much. Plus, the sex is super hot - moreso because the characters are engaging. What a pleasure - thank you!

This is an excellent, well-written, fun tale! I love the characters and building plot. I'd especially love to hear the rest of this story and others set in this universe. Thanks for sharing this!

Unfortunately the author passed away in January. Please read her bio for her last update in November.

It's just sad that she never got to finish most or any(?) of her story series.

She was very very good. Very enjoyable to read.