All Comments on 'Grease Monkey Business Pt. 02'

Please keep it up!

I figured we might get a wreck for the cliffhanger!

Interesting shot of inserting Danica then having her pull that stunt. Funny!

You write and paint these two so well with how they interact. I anxiously await ch. 3. This is a 5 hands down. :)

I look forward to the next one. Thanks.

Great writing looking forward to the next chapter

If she's hurt....lol. 5 as usual for you. Great story.

fantastic, hope the wait isn't as long for part 3

Just waiting for Ch. 03....please!

Almost a very yum.. chapter; but the ending was to abrupt... thank you though!

*still glaring suspiciously*

Good story with lots of interest holding racing info. being a race fan and former racer stories like this are few and far between. Having the background and the story line you are working is truly enjoyable. Looking forward to more, and soon!!! Thanks for the reality in your work!

This was the first one of your stories that I read. I loved it. I have now read several of your stories. I love how you develop your characters and how easy it to bond with them

Please keep it up and don't make us wait for the continuation of GMB.

Love the story line and story waiting for next chapter

He bought her a chassis. A frame would have been just the frame rails and crossmembers connecting the two rails; a frame would be ready for the suspension, but not include it.

A chassis from Art WOULD be an expensive gift. I was surprised Julie was initially opposed to Red buying her a frame, (the suspension is the expense part of a chassis), but later learning it was really a chassis, her reluctance made sense.

It probably set Red back more than the motor she ordered.

Anyway, you have done so well with the other 'car' aspects of the story, I thought you might want to know about the frame/chassis issue.

Good tale, (but you are a total shit for the cliffhanger), thanks for sharing your creativity, and also for all the work it takes to put together a finished submission.

Regards,

GeoD

Just one thing, everyone giggles too much. Couldn't Red at least 'chuckle'?

Not fair to stop mid race with an unknown situation.

Soon?

Makings of a good story,if the author would cut back on the sex scenes,which just drag the story out.

You can't leave us hanging like this hurry up and write the next installment,