by Creekman
Looking forward to more adventures as our hero crusies around the eastern half of the United States
Great start to your series, try a little more detail in your scene s!
I'm never going to get to go so I want all the little details to make me feel as if I was there. Not just the sex but more about the places and sights along the way. Please?
Nice story. Loving the sex, but I feel more like an observer than an involved reader. I felt like you were rushing things along, Giving a summary.