All Comments on 'Great Loop Ch. 02'

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carmel12carmel12almost 8 years ago
loop the loop

Looking forward to more adventures as our hero crusies around the eastern half of the United States

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Keep going!

Great start to your series, try a little more detail in your scene s!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
nice beginning

A good story that makes you want to cum back for more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I Want More Details about the Loop

I'm never going to get to go so I want all the little details to make me feel as if I was there. Not just the sex but more about the places and sights along the way. Please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great start.

Nice story. Loving the sex, but I feel more like an observer than an involved reader. I felt like you were rushing things along, Giving a summary.

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