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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Read like a summary

Next to last paragraph is good example of what I mean: 3 hours of passionate sex summarized in one brief paragraph as if you were bored with it and wanted to get on with the journey. Most of the other parts read like a summary too.

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