by RedFenix
As an avid reader of Nora Roberts' romance novels, it only took me five seconds to realize that you'd copied from her novel "The Reef". Your entire sex scene was paraphrased from the main character's Tate and Matthew's scene on pg. 296, fourth full paragraph to pg 297.
I thought "writers" were supposed to come up with their own material?
I have to say. The ending especially with the "Good" statement said with such confidence and authority...gah. So excellent. Plus, it was sort of funny that he was putting on a show for Poor "peeping" Jean Grey.