by 2CHaNces
wow, leora is so adorable! curious to find out about aris's past as well as basils.
I like your story so far. What are the ages, they both seem like they are in their early teens.
...but you need an editor there were a lot of little mistakes, and I can relate I'm just sending in the second chapter to my first story. READ IT lol! Anyway I love the idea and Basil sounds adorable!
I like what I'm seeing so far. Hope to see another chapter soon.
I am really liking it. I like the characters and the storyline. I'm looking forward to part 2!