All Comments on 'Green Tea with Jasmine Pt. 04'

by ArchieWaltham

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naughtywriter2naughtywriter2over 8 years ago
I like the ending.

There is love and respect there. Fetishes aside, we are all human beings with normal lives and the ability to love and leave. Your shoulder jockeys seemed to understand . Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Re the full story

I am unsure what to think, or perhaps think too many things. It is intriguing and unsettling. Confusing and simple. Gritty like a public bathroom floor and yet caring and a bit sweet. I can't say I enjoyed it, but I am glad I read it.

ArchieWalthamArchieWalthamover 8 years agoAuthor
Sweet and gritty

Thank you for your comment and I am glad that you found the story memorable.

MsCMMsCMover 8 years ago
Sad, sweet, grown up, very well written...

... and the flogging lesson from Stepan was hot af (even if I had to make significant anatomical adjustments to the object in my head).

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