All Comments on 'Grey Sky Ch. 02'

love both chapters so far, loved reading them. keep up the brilliant work.

to finish this story. I love where you are going with this story and hope you don't keep us waiting for the next chapter and maybe a little longer ones too.

So far the kids are the best part of this. I love the mix of knowledge they have that makes them seem older but still with an air of innocence. I'm interested in how Tyler gets a sense of whether a person is good or not. I am interested in why Vicky sees the alpha as being weak. And if the kids weren't part of the plan, why did they take them? They seem to see them as more trouble than they're worth so I wonder why? Too bad they didn't look at the letterhead to get the address of the place so when their parents got close they could tell them. But, they are only six. I look forward to learning more about this whole situation. Why is the beta more feared than the alpha? What is the crest she wants? What is the association? hope we learn more in the next chapter

keep it up!

i can't wait to know what will happen to Lily and the twins~

i hope lily gets into their pack :)

Good story and one of the few writers on her these days who appears to have a dictionary. guid work lass get typing

please post another ch.

This story has a lot of potential, can't wait to see what happens next so don't leave us hanging like this.

The writing is good, didn't pick up on any mistakes at all was enjoying the story too much.

Why are you leaving us hanging with just those 2 chapters? It's been over a year now.

Please finish the story

from the looks of it you are not going to finish this story. its a pitty, cause a few people, myself included would have loved to see what happens next. i know its hard to write a story, but whats the point of getting people hooked and then not finishing the story? could you at least tell your fans why you are not finishing or just say you have writers block.

You had a very good start to what could have been an excellent story ..... It Would be good if you could finish it

Please continue this story, you have a wonderful talent!

This story is so good, it deserves to be completed. Won't you please continue writing it and bring it to a satisfying finish?

Good story so far..waiting for the next chapter

Please...please update this story!!

This is great! Please continue it!

I came across this story and found it a breath of fresh air....very different and will a good story line. Please finish it, I want to know what happens :)

Please finish this story! It is really good. Want to know what happens!