All Comments on 'Grim Fairy Tales Ch. 02'

ok but not good (your standards). to close to reality, it has not the "not normal" touch. no guy in real life would after ch. 1 and 2 be calm or turned on. it's not like he was there and saw the developement (willing or not too willing). this is a guy who married a woman who for him all of a sudden is the townbike fucking everybody he knows and says :

"Find a man you can love with all your heart and all your soul. I have that in Jim, and I would never jeopardize it without good reason," she told the girls

but after all she finds good reasons almost every day. so after 20 years I would say , mission impossible, they would be dead because the would have had every std possible. and if per chance not, no guy would stay with her. if not for her past then for all she did for good reasons! only somebody with alexithymia or psychopaths without the ability of empathy could possible just go on as nothing happened.

the guy in this story is nothing like that so it turns out a bit strange but not in a fun way. all the girls act like 4 year olds which is strange as they otherwise do not seem degenerated and have good jobs.

I think it's funny that people come on here expecting works of literary prowess, complete with a realistic plot and character development. These stories are meant to get you off. So I say kudos to you, DocCIS. You did precisely that.

Thanks...that was all it was meant to be, hehehe...so glad it delivered :p

I recently was going through old stories and have uploaded a newer version of this story here with corrected spellings and grammar. Although never 100% perfect, hopefully this version flows a bit better...