by velvetpie
Read the whole thing all 9 parts, just could not tear myself away.
I loved the mix of sensuality and otherworldly tid bits :)
I can't wait for the next submission.
By far one of my fav lit writers.
By the way did you intentionally borrow the look of a Hindu God?
If not do be careful if you plan to main stream this in any way, the Hindu community can be a bit how do I put this nicely...? Catty I suppose will have to suffice.
Belive me I have taken a lot of flack over the years for my portrayals of Hindu religious figures.
Other than that I see a well written story, I admit I tended to re word some of the more graphic portions in my mind but I am a bit of a purde ;)
Perfering the tamer wordings to the ones seen here.